hi buddy ;)
I really like the chocolate rain sample!Furtheromore, the construction of the song is really good !
Otherwise u must work a bit more on mix, the voice and the beat need to be higher and the all long-song-synth could be lowered.
Anyway with those changes i m pretty sure it will pretty rox ! LeT me Hear that bass ;)
Dont hesitate to contact me if you make some changes ! could be one of my fav outta here !!
Good luck next ! (and come see my comps if u got time somes dayz =) )